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As I watched you became the beast
Colder then ice on a winters day
Everything changing as you longed to feast
Gnawing inside you a thirst, a hunger
I wanted to save you, but I've lost my judgment
Kindled inside me is such strange longing
Motioning to me, you call my name
Opening your arms protectively
Quietly you whisper, Run
Startling me, in jarring time
Under the pale moon, a distant violin
Watching me is, the one, Xavius
Your creator and zenith
©2009 =Ferelwing
:iconferelwing:

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This is an absammydarian [link] created by :iconkiwi-damnation:

This is my entry into her contest [link]

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:iconvixxenfairy:
Wow, absolutely amazing. I got goosebumps reading it! I wish you all the best for the contest and I'm keepin my fingers crossed!
:iconcsnyder:
awesome, really nice my friend
love the flow
:iconcreepyplz:
:icontyc113:
That is really good. I like it.

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Blackbird singing in the dead of night.

My youtube [link]
:iconferelwing:
:iconcuddleplz: I'm so very glad!

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******:floating: Li :floating:*******

****:meditate: *Oogway: Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift. That is why it is called the present. ":meditate:***
:iconferelwing:
:blush: Aww thank you so much sweetie! Yeah me too! There are lots of awesome poets entering the contest.

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******:floating: Li :floating:*******

****:meditate: *Oogway: Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift. That is why it is called the present. ":meditate:***
:iconferelwing:
:hug: Thank you very much! :hug:

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******:floating: Li :floating:*******

****:meditate: *Oogway: Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift. That is why it is called the present. ":meditate:***
:iconcsnyder:
youre very welcome:hug:
:icontyc113:
I'm glad you are.

--
Blackbird singing in the dead of night.

My youtube [link]
:iconferelwing:
:iconbigheartplz:

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******:floating: Li :floating:*******

****:meditate: *Oogway: Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift. That is why it is called the present. ":meditate:***

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