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For Jacob

Your light went out so young
You left our lives too quick
It's hard to believe its over
Life streams past us
The numbness of loss
A child gone taken too soon
A mother crying in her room
Too many have gone this way
It breaks our hearts each day
The pain of loss and missing you
Your mother loved you
Just know that was true
As long as your memory is
In our hearts you'll live
Forever
©2007-2009 =Ferelwing
:iconferelwing:

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A friend of mine's best friend lost her son today. It hurts to think of a child gone so young... I wrote this in his memory. Not really much more I can say...

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:iconfyredrago:
*hugs*

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“It's the heart afraid of breaking that never learns to dance. It is the dream afraid of waking that never takes the chance. It is the one who won't be taken who cannot seem to give. And the soul afraid of dying that never learns to live.” - Bette Midler
:icongigglingtot:
poetically, i really like how this reads as if the author is crying, especially at the end.

:hug: x 500000000000

we are also burying someone. he died in a motorcycle accident...

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"only when the last tree has died, and the last river been poisoned, and the last fish been caught will we realize that we can't eat money." based on a Cree saying
:iconfantasyfairy1:
so sorry to hear that hun, when one dies so young it is such a waste. Love the emotion in the poem.

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:reading: Live every day as if it were your last, because one day it will be :writersblock:
:iconferelwing:
:hug: thanks hon.

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******:floating: Li :floating:*******

****:meditate: *Oogway: Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift. That is why it is called the present. ":meditate:***
:iconferelwing:
:hug: thanks, he died suddenly of a heart attack... He was playing basketball walked off to get a drink got up then went and sat back down, slumped over and was in the hospital with a 50/50 chance of survival. He passed yesterday... I'm kinda numb. I didn't know him very well.. However one of my closest friends is broken up about it and since I have 3 sons of my own I know how I'd feel.

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******:floating: Li :floating:*******

****:meditate: *Oogway: Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift. That is why it is called the present. ":meditate:***
:iconferelwing:
:hug: Thank you.

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******:floating: Li :floating:*******

****:meditate: *Oogway: Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift. That is why it is called the present. ":meditate:***
:iconferelwing:
Yeah it truly is. He died suddenly from what appears to have been a heart attack. It's still really shocking.

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******:floating: Li :floating:*******

****:meditate: *Oogway: Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift. That is why it is called the present. ":meditate:***

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