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Heart Break by =Ferelwing:iconFerelwing:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Fixed


Heart break

Heart of sadness heart of pain
Do not do this to me again

Love do not dissuade my thoughts
Please free me from these broken plots

Do not forsake me to broken lies
Please I beg thee hear my cries!

Love I do and deeply so
Please my soul just let it go

No more pain can I bear
Knowing you're no longer there

Free me from this bitter curse
My heart feels as if it will burst

No more I beg no more I say
Let the pained hounds bay!

I am nothing more then Cupid's prey
Feeling the emotions upon my bitter soul flay

Fallen am I to loves wretched grasp
Again I am lost to a knife my hand does clasp

If I cannot free myself of this dreaded emotion
Then let the blood flow into the ocean!
©2005-2009 =Ferelwing
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Author's Comments

This poem is what I have been meaning to write about for a long time. The feeling when my heart begins to break. It's something that I feel on occasion even now. *sigh*

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:iconlilithlairpoetry:
~LilithLairPoetry Apr 12, 2005, 10:17:09 AM
Beautiful imagery, though morbid and dismal!! I still like the two line runs in each stanza!! Good Job!!

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"Bad memories can kill me, but the good ones I have can save my life" * LilithLairPoetry
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=Ferelwing Apr 12, 2005, 10:25:37 AM
*grin* Yeah it is kind of morbid *grin*.

Thanks for the compliment *hugs* it means a lot Lee!

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******:floating: Li :floating:*******

****:meditate: *Oogway: Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift. That is why it is called the present. ":meditate:***
:iconlilithlairpoetry:
~LilithLairPoetry Apr 12, 2005, 10:34:32 AM
Your welcome Lisa!!*hugs* :)

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"Bad memories can kill me, but the good ones I have can save my life" * LilithLairPoetry
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=Ferelwing Apr 12, 2005, 10:40:12 AM
*hugs*

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******:floating: Li :floating:*******

****:meditate: *Oogway: Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift. That is why it is called the present. ":meditate:***
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~Your-Canadian-Angel Apr 12, 2005, 7:55:51 PM
wow i like this a lot!! :) great job!!!
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=Ferelwing Apr 12, 2005, 9:02:14 PM
*blush* Thanks I am glad you like it! *SNUG*

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******:floating: Li :floating:*******

****:meditate: *Oogway: Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift. That is why it is called the present. ":meditate:***
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~Fat-Luie Apr 23, 2005, 12:55:16 AM
awwww thats so beautiful!!!

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:heart: I love u!:heart:
Inyë vanda mel oialë. Elyë i minenya. elwennya-lya. Eyë mernë parmatémalya meldanya. inyë méla tye.
:iconferelwing:
=Ferelwing Apr 25, 2005, 8:41:02 AM
*blush* Thanks! I appreciate it!

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******:floating: Li :floating:*******

****:meditate: *Oogway: Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift. That is why it is called the present. ":meditate:***
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~GigglingTot May 2, 2005, 10:14:54 AM
wow... powerful and definitely a great capture of that emotion... that feeling when your heart is breaking, even when it seems there is no reason for a heartbreak.

"No more I beg no more I say/ [I am nothing more then Cupid's prey]" <~~ seems like those two lines should go together...

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"only when the last tree has died, and the last river been poisoned, and the last fish been caught will we realize that we can't eat money." based on a Cree saying
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