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I long to take away your nightmares
To whisper I love you
To tear away the heartache
That follows everything you do
If I could take away your pain
It would only be enough
Just to show you to the light
Of something else to love
If I could remove the passing darkness
That fills deep inside your soul
I would want it to be enough
To finally make you whole
If I could share one more moment
Just listening to you laugh
I'd climb the highest mountain
Or tickle a giraffe
I know that every moment
You try to hide your pain
I just wish there was something
To take you from the rain
If I could find it, I promise
Straight from my heart
To lead you far away from that
And out of the dark
I'd do my best to find you
your own special peace
If only you'd take my hand
I'd try to make it cease
I won't make you follow
I'd let you come and see
I'd try... If you'd let me..
©2009 =Ferelwing
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:iconcreativemikey:
so beautifully done

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:icongiffordm:
this is very beautiful...tickle a giraffe...heeheehee. thank you luv. it means a lot to me.

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:iconperso-melodia:
Beautiful. I can relate a lot to that at the moment :heart:

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And then i lower in my whole mouth and take a gulp
...and start to feel mortality surround me
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:iconmordriel:
That's gorgeous. I love the feeling in it. :) OF NOTE: I have attempted to tickle a giraffe in the past. I do not suggest doing so.

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:iconferelwing:
:giggle: Why is it that I can somehow clearly see you doing this... :evillaugh:

Thanks hon! :huggle:

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:huggle: It hurts to see someone else hurt huh? :huggle:

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******:floating: Li :floating:*******

****:meditate: *Oogway: Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift. That is why it is called the present. ":meditate:***
:iconferelwing:
:huggle: I'm glad you enjoyed it hon! :huggle: :giggle: Yeah I thought the giraffe comment would make you laugh.. You're so very welcome! I hope it cheered you up!

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******:floating: Li :floating:*******

****:meditate: *Oogway: Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift. That is why it is called the present. ":meditate:***
:iconferelwing:
:huggle: Thank you so very much! :huggle:

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******:floating: Li :floating:*******

****:meditate: *Oogway: Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift. That is why it is called the present. ":meditate:***
:icongiffordm:
mission accomplished...

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