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My life's pathway

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So many times along the way
I've lost somehow my dream
The wind seems heroically to say

I've seen the water sway
I've known more then it'd seem
So many times along the way


I've kept my fears at bay
The stars sometimes they gleam
The wind seems heroically to say


My path holds firm from day to day
Though not what others would deem
So many times along the way

I hold fast to my way
No matter what t'would seem
The wind seems to heroically say


I find no pity into the day
No matter what it would seem
So many times along the way
The wind seems heroically to say
:iconrenegade-angel23: and :iconpeterdawes: have been doing these challenges put out by [link] . This is my Villanelle, I'm not sure it's quite right. I might go through and rewrite it.

This is the last of the forms challenge for this month and I'm very glad I was a part of it! I'd like to thank :iconkiwi-damnation: for all her work in coming up with this! She did wonderfully and I look forward to another challenge!
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kiwi-damnation's avatar
Beautiful my dear, beautiful.