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Tell me the storyTell me the story of a hero
Turned himself back from zero

Made me dream outside my cell
Knew me so very well

Tell me the story of an angel
A love that doesn't gauge well

Hearts beating in a distant time
Souls waiting for a patient sign

Tell me the story of a shining star
One that's gone so very far

Loves mark upon their face
Eyes lit with patient grace

Tell me the story of Love
One that never goes when push comes to shove

Hopeless romantic of my dreams
More than he truly seems

Tell me the story of fate
Before I finally lock the gate

Tried and true the methods of the heart
Never to be torn apart
Dance of a HeartbeatAs I lay me down to sleep
Should death, ever, my soul reap
This love I shall always keep

In your name, steadfast, I hold on
Our common ground a special bond
That sees me to the coming dawn

When day breaks across the sky
The soft heartbeat that holds me by
Will help me find the reason why

Two hearts in a spiral pattern meet
They dance to the same beat
Softly we feel the heat

Loves compassion holds our soul
Two hearts combined to be whole
Yin and Yang balanced the final goal
My sweet sweet loveMy dear sweet sweet love
You're everything I ever wanted
And nothing that I deserved

The light of your eyes shining
Your soft sweet embrace
The way your hair frames your face

My dear sweet sweet love
You're everything I ever needed
And nothing that I can have

I'd rather watch and dissipate
Or lend a helping hand
Then ever let you see

My dear sweet sweet love
If I could pluck a star for you
I'd do it just to see your smile

The dazzling look on your face
When you're fully amused
Entrances me with such enticement

My dear sweet sweet love
The roses have shed tears
Their rubies are shamed by your eyes

Those eyes that hold me s

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No Answer to my Questionby *Ferelwing

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This is my response to "A question".. Sometimes we tear ourselves apart waiting for an answer.. Sometimes the answer is that there isn't one..

I'll let the words speak for themselves.. We've all been here.
©2009-2013 *Ferelwing
Category: Literature / Poetry / General Poetry / Visual & Found Poetry

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Mood: Unhappy ~askgregoryandstaff Nov 17, 2011  Student General Artist
that's deep emotion right there... TTATT its so beautiful.
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*Ferelwing Dec 14, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
:huggle: Aww thank you! :huggle: Yeah, it was a difficult time.
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~Lillymoondragon Nov 19, 2009
so sad and frustrating. But your right about coming up with good stuff in the shower.
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*Ferelwing Nov 19, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
:nod: Agreed! Of course I always lose the best lines in the shower *sigh*
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=DragonsChest Nov 15, 2009  Professional Writer
Poetry extraordinaire... :bow:
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*Ferelwing Nov 15, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
:blush: :nod: :blush:
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~jochanaan Nov 13, 2009
Very effective use of line repetition; that first line hits us harder every time we read it. Well written! :rose:
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*Ferelwing Nov 13, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
:blush: Thank you so very much!
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*motherearth01 Nov 13, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
Great writing again.
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*Ferelwing Nov 13, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
:blush: Well thank you!
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