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Sensual Libations by =Ferelwing:iconFerelwing:



As the lightning crashes
Our bodies glisten
Hearts entwined
As the world listens
The rain pours down
Our sole intentions
Passionate bliss
Beautiful temptations
Sensually we touch
Soft libations
Descent into
Indecent liberation
©2007-2009 =Ferelwing
:iconferelwing:

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Yeah it's one of those kind of nights..

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:iconashlyn:
This one speaks very loudly

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Magickalmoon
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:iconvykoth:
I agree, it does come through very strong. I really like this one, you did a nice job keeping it simplistic, yet it says a lot. It also flows quite well, although I would have made a few minor changes (as in the second line "The bodies glisten, perhaps could have been "our" instead, as you later mentioned "our sole intentions", "..we touch" etc).

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:iconferelwing:
Actually that's a good point.. I'll go and correct that! Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it enough to comment.

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******:floating: Li :floating:*******

****:meditate: *Oogway: Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift. That is why it is called the present. ":meditate:***
:iconferelwing:
I'm glad you liked it!

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******:floating: Li :floating:*******

****:meditate: *Oogway: Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift. That is why it is called the present. ":meditate:***
:iconlovesemoguys:
this hits a spot inside andthe imagery is beautiful good job

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<333 gelie.
:iconferelwing:
:hug: glad you like!

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******:floating: Li :floating:*******

****:meditate: *Oogway: Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift. That is why it is called the present. ":meditate:***
:icongigglingtot:
mm.. love the ending ma'am, and the flow. creates a very strong image

hope you're well today :hug:

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"only when the last tree has died, and the last river been poisoned, and the last fish been caught will we realize that we can't eat money." based on a Cree saying
:iconferelwing:
:hug: I'm doing much better sorta, Mom's bday it's kinda one of those days.

I'm glad you liked the poem! I was a bit drunk last night.

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******:floating: Li :floating:*******

****:meditate: *Oogway: Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift. That is why it is called the present. ":meditate:***
:icongigglingtot:
and you didn't invite me?!?!?!?! i mean seriously, it was only my christian beliefs exam and the only thing i need to remember is that jesus christ is my lord and savior (psh!) . and i already had my presentation done and practiced :cries: so sad...

but i hope you are doing well ma'am. and that you have enough things around to make you smile :hug:

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"only when the last tree has died, and the last river been poisoned, and the last fish been caught will we realize that we can't eat money." based on a Cree saying
:iconferelwing:
*laugh* Well you can come for the next sexual libations night *wink*

Things are going ok, I have my friend Laura here.

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******:floating: Li :floating:*******

****:meditate: *Oogway: Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift. That is why it is called the present. ":meditate:***

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